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Is the poem okay, sorry, this is a project and i really need the feedback, thanks ;)?

My Expression

I want to know,

when the time is right.

I want to feel,

you here at night.

My emotions are cold,

my heart is warm.

My expressions bold

I feel no need to uphold

I'm all alone,

left in the dark.

I'm attempting to pass,

week by week,

day by day,

I need you,

but I don't want you.

I wish I'd never met you

All through my....

Expression , Expression,

its a huge complication.

I wish you never existed,

the pain will stay with me forever.

Its not what I wanted,

but I want you to leave

right

now.

I've had enough of this feud,

I've suffered more than you.

The pain has left a mark,

and yet,

you stand there,

out of the dark.

I am chilled to the bone,

I am as cold as stone but

my expression,

is a musical tone

All through my....

Expression , Expression,

its a huge complication.

The pain is gone,

my life is in the dead zone,

my heart has gone cold,

but my expression,

my pain,

is non-existance.

I am now in a distance

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