hi,
i'm still new in english..
please check my grammar..i'm practising my writting..thanks
I still couldn't believe that I'm about to reach 20 this year. I have gone through a lot of things and that's what make me matured and make me strong just like what I am now.
I have never been a good students before but for the last two years when I was in college, I saw a lot of improvement in me. I learn how to take up responsibilities and how to study smartly and the best part is that, I discovered who I want to be when I grow up.
Life is so complicated and full of challenges, we learn a lot of things everyday and now I couldn't believe that I'm going to start working and move into an adulthood world which the challenges will be tougher, hopefully I'm strong enough to face my day.
no matter what happen, remember to put a smile on your face and also pray to God to ask for guidance.=)
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I still can not believe that I'm about to reach 20 this year. I have gone through a lot of things and that's what makes me mature and makes me strong just like what I am now.
I have never been a good student before but for the last two years when I was in college, I saw a lot of improvement in myself. I learned how to take up responsibilities and how to study smartly and the best part is that, I discovered who I want to be when I grow up.
Life is so complicated and full of challenges, we learn a lot of things everyday and now I can not believe that I'm going to start working and move into an adult world in which the challenges will be tougher. Hopefully I'm strong enough to face my day.
No matter what happens, remember to put a smile on your face and also pray to God to ask for guidance.=)
You did very well this up here is the corrected version. Main change was "couldn't" to "can not or can't" either one couldn't refers to the past and can not to the present
Reference: english major
Practicing, with a c not s
I still CAN"T believe
that is what made me mature and made me as strong as I am now.
a good student ( no s) while I was in college
improvement in myself.
I learned how to become responsible and to study ( leave off the "that" before I discovered)
Can't believe
an adult world where the challenges will be tougher. Hopefully I am strong enough to face each day.
what happens