Featured Answer

Asked on

can someone please check my grammar?

hi,

i'm still new in english..

please check my grammar..i'm practising my writting..thanks

I still couldn't believe that I'm about to reach 20 this year. I have gone through a lot of things and that's what make me matured and make me strong just like what I am now.

I have never been a good students before but for the last two years when I was in college, I saw a lot of improvement in me. I learn how to take up responsibilities and how to study smartly and the best part is that, I discovered who I want to be when I grow up.

Life is so complicated and full of challenges, we learn a lot of things everyday and now I couldn't believe that I'm going to start working and move into an adulthood world which the challenges will be tougher, hopefully I'm strong enough to face my day.

no matter what happen, remember to put a smile on your face and also pray to God to ask for guidance.=)

Answers (2)

Collapse
izrcmosoaa profile image
Collapse
mm0ga9g6aa profile image

Practicing, with a c not s

I still CAN"T believe

that is what made me mature and made me as strong as I am now.

a good student ( no s) while I was in college

improvement in myself.

I learned how to become responsible and to study ( leave off the "that" before I discovered)

Can't believe

an adult world where the challenges will be tougher. Hopefully I am strong enough to face each day.

what happens